专题05短文改错（第07期）-2022届旧高考名校英语好题速递分项汇编
【河南省十所名校2021-2022学年高三上学期期中】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修
改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每
处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There is always an old woman sitting near where I live, begging passers-by money.
Whenever I see her, I make sure to give her something. If I am out of money, at less I talk to her
for some time. When other people is around, I often make sure to drop several coin into her cup in
the hope that they will do the same.
Today I pass her again. As the usual, I gave her some money or asked her how she was. She
said she wanted to thank me, not just for the money, but also for my always take the time to talk to
her. That she said surprised me great.
短文改错【江西省九江市十校联考2021-2022学年高三上学期期中】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday afternoon, Mr. Liu, a famous psychologist, has delivered a lecture about mental
health for the students of senior 3 in the school auditorium.
A lecture lasted about two hours. Mr. Liu taught the students what to handle stress, setbacks
and failures and how to improve them interpersonal skills. His lecture consisted in three sections:
the concept of mental health, the symptoms of unhealthy psychology state and how to improve
one*s mentally health. Before the lecture, he gave some advices to the students who needed help.
The students learned a lot from the lecture. Not only they realize the importance of mental
health, but they also found the approaches to improve it.
【云南省15所名校2021-2022学年高三上学期11月份联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之
间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有
两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
How are you doing? I am now working like a student editor of my schoofs English website
and in charge of a new column calling After-school Life. It reports diversity after-school events
and activities from home and abroad broaden students9 horizons. I wondered if you could do me a
favor and record some of your after-school events. If be possible, please send me some picture and
videos about your thrilling activities. The more, the better, of course! By a way, do you have time
to visit your website vvww. hongxinghighschooL com? I would appreciate it if you can tell me that
you think of it. Thanks a lot!
【安徽省九师联盟2021-2022学年高三上学期11月联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两
处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\\）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our city is no longer what it was used to be. Nowadays, a lot of things have been done to
make it more beautifully. Firstly, many trees have been planted around the city. The whole city is
dressed on green. Besides, the polluting rivers have been cleaned up but there are more fish in the
rivers. Moreover, a new park, that allows people to have fun and relax, has been built in a center
of the city. Finally, people have been encouraged go to work by bike or on feet. In this way, the air
pollution have been greatly reduced. In short, our city has become better and better.
短文改错【江西省七校2021-2022学年高三上学期第一次联考】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：
1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改1。处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father and I have one thing in common: we are all music lovers. My father loves sing as
well as listening to music. Every morning, they will go to the park nearby and practise singing
there. In the evening, when he usually enjoys music with my mother. He says music makes
himself relaxed after a day's work.
Unlike my father, I like playing a violin. I'm regarded as one of the best violinist in my
school. I still remember I once invite my father to the music festival in my school where I played a
beautiful piece music. I could see how proudly he was while I was playing. Music brings us
together.
【贵州省贵阳市五校2021-2022学年高三上学期11月联合考试（三）】假定英语课上老师要
求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句
中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符（人），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改1。处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
You've joined in all the classes, so finished all of your homework, and studied hard. You
think you have the better understanding of those learning material. But then the day of the test
comes. Suddenly, you feel such nervous that you can't get it together. You can't respond those
questions you knew the answers of just last night. If this sounded like you, you may have a case of
lest anxiety. People sometimes get that nervous feeling when you are about to take a rest. But you
should know that it's pretty normally to feel a little nervous and stressing before a test. Just
everyone does.
【云南省昆明市2022届高三摸底】假定英语课上，老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你
修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词
的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I left my umbrella in a clinic when seen a doctor last week. I had to pick it up from the
medical workers today. So on the phone, I asked the nurse what it would be convenient for the
staff. There was a moment of silent, and then she said anytime will be OK except between 12 and
2.1 got to there at 11:30 am and I told my name to reception nurse. She looked at me careful for a
while. \"Patient rarely ask what time is convenient fbr us. But they usually only expect us to meet
at a time convenient fbr them. Thank you for getting inside everyone else's mind!,, she said.
【四川省泸州市2021-2022学年高三上学期第一次教学质量诊断性】假定英语课上老师要求
同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中
最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays most students are addicted to sharing with pictures in WeChat circle. They even
shared all sorts of photos in their daily life. WeChat does make it more conveniently for us to
understand and communicate. Therefore, there exists some potential trouble if we overshare. One
serious problem is letting out our privacy （隐私），that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, others
may feel uncomfortable, thought we are showing off. In my opinion, we'd better not post their
personal information, or blindly adding strangers to a list of friends. It's much wiser to set aside
some time accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking
exercises.
短文改错【黑龙江省龙东地区四校2021-2022学年高三上学期11月联考】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw you attention to the community lecture concerning garbage
classification. As we all know, garbage classification is of great significant for environmental
protection. We should try our best make our community an better place.
Garbage classification not only benefits the environment, but reduce the workload of workers.
More important, it can help us develop a sense of responsibility and form good habits for
ourselves. What's more, the garbage where is classified can be recycled and turned into value
resources.
The lecture will be held in the hall at 9 am next Sunday. I hope you can come and join in us.
Making a contribution to garbage classification, please.
Yours,
Hongqi Community
【广西柳州市2021-2022学年高三上学期第一次模拟】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换
修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the past three years, I have been great influenced by my best friend, Lucy. She is popular
with all the classmates due to her kind as well as her positive attitude towards life. Generally
speak, she is an excellent person who is worth making friends. I still remember the day that I told
her I had failed in a math test. To her surprise, she gave me a warm hug and encouraged me. She
said that we should never give up when face with difficulties.She kept telling me she believed I
would make a great progress one day. Thanks to her encouragement, I finally get out of the
shadow. How lucky I am to have so a nice friend!
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