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时间：2023-10-09 02:11
Li Ming went to the park in last Saturday afternoon after he had already finished his homeworks ．He saw several boys skating in the pond happily．Suddenly he heard a cry for help． Looked ahead，he found one of the boys had fell into the water．Li Ming jumped into the icy water immediately and manages to pull the boy to safe ．Then the boy was given the first aid but soon came to myself ．The boy's parents came soon after they received the phone call．They were very grateful∧Li Ming，who was trembling there with cold．
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1．去掉in 考查介词．last Saturday afternoon作时间状语时前面不加介词．
homeworks改为homework 考查名词．homework是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
3．in改为on 考查介词．根据skating可知，应是"在池塘上"，用介词on．
4．Looked改为Looking 考查现在分词．he与look之间主谓关系，用现在分词作状语．
"5．fell改为fallen 考查动词时态．had后接过去分词构成过去完成时态，fall的过去分词是fallen，fell是过去式．
6．manages改为managed 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．safe改为safety 考查名词．to是介词，后接名词作宾语，形容词safe的名词是safety．
8．but改为and 考查连词．前后两个单句是并列关系，而非转折关系，用连词and．
9．myself改为himself 考查代词．应是"他苏醒了"，用反身代词himself．
10．加to 考查介词．be grateful to意为"感激（对…感谢）"，是固定搭配．
