高一英文日记,求学霸看看有没有语法,时态错误,必采纳
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热心网友
有些时态不一致了亲。我是大学商务英语专业的
热心网友
不知道你是要写日记还是什么。我建议最好都用过去时。
你可以这样写
Yesterday was the national day.I was so excited,because it was the first time i went to the Great wall with my parents.
We got up early in the morning. Taking number 311 bus we got there abou nine o'clock,the sun was shining brightly , and we felt very excited to vist the Great wall.
还有应该是 there were plenty of people visting the Great wall,
the foreigners were very friendly, I also told them the history of the Great wall会比较好
we take lots of photos不要加of us
最后Tired but happy,we went home.Not only did i do some exercise,but also i told the hisory of the Great wall to the foreigers.I was proud of my motherland
热心网友
由文章后文可见这是记叙一天的旅游，出了开头的几句和后面抒情的几句都应用过去式哦
